First of all, I love the red colors that you gave her dress. Her dress is very nicely colored and the way you made the folds and creases was very smooth. Seeing how you made the background tells me that you like to watch anime; that is a good thing. Seeing how the light shines upon the setting in this picture, I would say that it's about 1600 to 1800 hours in the afternoon. The train had stayed at the station for a few minutes and then took off.
The girl is holding one suitcase in her right hand, and it appears that there is a bigger piece of luggage behind her. What makes look more tedious to be carrying all that around is that she has that birdcage to worry about also. Even when I look at the girl's facial expression I don't see that she looks happy. She's looking straight ahead as if to say "I still have all that way to go myself with all this luggage." Or she could bee saying "My ride still isn't here yet!"
So even though she doesn't look to be in a good mood, I really like this picture because it's bright, happy, and mildly cheery. You really did a nice job at making this picture. If this were an actual anime series, I would love to watch it. It look like it would very interesting and easy to follow.