Dalenbourg1Featured By OwnerMar 20, 2012Student General Artist
your colours and form are great, but there seems to be something dis-harmonizing about the layout, like the perspective doesn't seem right and the reaction of materials against the rush of wind seems too toned down for the situation.
I think it's because some missing structure in the pic. It was hard to get some composition going on with tones after i finished the lines. The perpective things comes probably from the girls pointing in different directions. Thanks for the crit :>, I'll try to get better