I loved scary/mysterious stories as child (well, still doing so). In childhood everything felt so intense, so I tried to get these mysterious and a little dangerous feelings into it and tried to make the old dude and everything look really intense.
It's awesome :> I love the ghost thingy in upper right shelf. It reminds me of the ghost from pokemon blue. one critique I can give is that the girl on the right's face looks a bit weird. I guess that perspective was hard? It also looks like she is not looking at men guy telling the story, but the scary eye in the upper left. If this was intentional, it's actually pretty cool Good job!
Thanks for the critique. I didn't practiced this kind of angle of heads much, so yeah, there's a high possiblity of weirdness (she's supposed to look at the reader btw ;_ Gonna practice more, thanks for the motivation!